This week: Bringing your drama to lifeEdited by: Elle - on hiatus
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If your drama is feeling flat and/or boring, what can you do to bring it to life? What tools do you have at your disposal to help pull your readers in to the story, and once there, keep their interest? I explore (and explain) some advice that is popular with reviewers.
I have recently been challenged, on two different fronts, to 'put my money where my mouth is' and practice showing instead of telling. Yes, I am one of those reviewers who tells writers that they need more showing in their writing. Not as a matter of course, obviously, but when I think their writing will benefit from such advice. It's a popular refrain, practically a cliche these days, and yet that doesn't make it any less true.
For those who are unfamiliar with showing versus telling, it is the difference between telling the reader a fact and describing the scene (showing it) so that the reader comes to that conclusion on their own.
For example, as part of a poetry class held by the "Fantasy and Science Fiction Society" , I had to come up with a descriptive way of saying 'She was tired'. My offer was 'She drooped with exhaustion.' Do you see the difference? What about 'The plant died' versus 'A final tattered leaf came to rest on the dry soil as the seedling gave up its struggle to survive.' Or even 'It was warm' versus 'Waves of heat shimmered above the pavement.' Which is more descriptive, being told that it is warm, or the author describing the heat to you in a way that helps you to picture the scene?
Why does it matter? It draws the reader into your story and not only grabs their attention, but helps to hold it.
In drama, this is particularly important. It is easy to say 'He was upset' or 'She was excited' but when we are shown those emotions, the drama becomes more real to the reader, more intense. You could say 'She was scared', but it is much more dramatic to say 'Her breath caught in her throat as a footstep sounded from the shadows, the hair on her arms and the back of her neck standing up as she quickened her pace.'
Showing is almost inevitably longer, with a higher word count, than telling. If you're participating in National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), this is a good thing! But either way, it helps to bring your drama to life and draw your readers into the story.
Now, I would be remiss if I didn't point out that every good story is a balance of showing AND telling. But if you're struggling to capture the mood, or your drama feels a little flat, see if you can restore that balance by converting some of your telling into showing.
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