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★★★★★ (3)
Rated: E · Outline · Other · #1167100

This is just my review outline ^_^

*Exclaim* Note: This review is not based on your grammar. It will be based on character development, overall story development, originality, and descriptiveness. The review is not based on your grammar BECAUSE... well Sadly I am terrible with grammar... I would do more damage then help in that department *Smile* *Exclaim*






*Smile* Characters! *Smile*




*Bigsmile* What I thought was original about this piece. *Bigsmile*




*Flower1* Overall development. *Flower1*




*Balloon2* Descriptions. *Balloon2*




*Thumbsup* What I liked about this piece. *Thumbsup*




*Note1* What I think needs a little more work. *Note1*




*Cool* Overall thoughts. *Cool*



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