Eyes

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The eyes stare back at me
Eyes so empty
So lifeless
So full of pain
Eyes of darkness
Eyes of hate
These eyes are mine
What's becoming of me
A pit so black as the darkest sea
These eyes are mine
Those eyes shall weep
Those eyes shall bleed
But forever those eyes
Shall always be mine


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