Just drop

Section of my novel, needs improving

With a swift barrel role and tuck of the wings he plummeted to the black mist below. He slipped through the clouds without hesitation as wisps of evaporation trailed behind his large white wings that were propped hard against his body. Their feathers seemed to shimmer as the turbulence forced a wall of air to brush through them.
As the bubble of dark mist loomed before him he could see a pitch black funnel spanning from the centre like a blinded eye to a hurricane. The wall of shadow reached out to pull him down as he transcended through the solid gloom, drowning in the screaming darkness.