"My First Time"

First post on this site

Well I'm new to this site and it is my first post,
I' hoping for feed back from coast to coast.

I have done this for years some say I can write,
But i am looking for feedback from all on this site.

Please bear with me though my grammar is bad,
I can write when im happy or if I am sad.

Don't be afraid to say what you think
Let me know if i'm OK or you think that i stink.

My goal on here is to try and get better
My Wifes calling my name I dont' want to upset her.

So i'm afraid  this poem has to come to an end,
So to all on this site I hope I can be your friend.