Scarlet Gold

Just want some thoughts on my writing, anything will help. Thank you.

Go to the Drawer, take out a sharp toy
Connect to the skin, and relish in joy.

Gold that is scarlet, will flow from your veins
Yet don't you worrie, for there is no pain.

Drift into yourself, Let me take over
Fall back in my arms
For your no longer sober.

Its easy you see, to let it all go
Forget all the rest, and never say no.