Should I Jump?

A Tanka Poem I wrote about a person questioning the reliability of their friends.

A poem I wrote for a class assignment

Jump



Why can't I just jump

There is no one here for me

Wait, there are my friends

Will they save me from this jump

There is one way to find out

                                                Forever, Mirror Lynn



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Part 2 (4-4-12)

With me laying here

I feel so open and free

A friend next to me

For I did not fall to death

Cause a true friend said don't jump