Pantoum

This is my first Pantoum.

Pantoum

When I was going along my way
I suddenly hit a high, white wall.
Some said turn right, others nay,
I thought how pride goes before a fall,

I suddenly hit a high white wall,
I knelt there in the cold, dark night,
I thought how pride goes before a fall,
After that nothing would go right.

I knelt there in the cold, dark night,
The wind blown completely out of me.
After that nothing would go right,
I struggled to get up from my knee.

The wind was blown completely out of me,
I saw bright stars, and a white glove;
I struggled to get up from my knee,
When I heard a voice from up above.

I saw bright stars, and a white glove,
When I heard a voice from up above,
I struggled to get up from my knee,
I felt God's presence -- Perfect Love.

When I heard a voice from up above.
Some said turn right, others nay.
I felt God's presence -- Perfect Love,
when I was going along my way.