I came to this site seeking critique for my work . I may get good reviews from family , friends and teachers but I want more detailed reviews from those who don`t feel as if they have an obligation to be lenient with me . My work can be described as grotesque because I love to use descriptive words to put the reader in the story and for them to watch it all unfold clearly . I want to inspire people with my work and I hope to change the world with it as well. I want to be good enough to profit from it for I have a nephew and myself to put through school and I want him to have as many opportunities as possible .Thank you for your time.