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Since January 9, 2015
18 Community Recognitions
I came to this site seeking critique for my work . I may get good reviews from family , friends and teachers but I want more detailed reviews from those who don`t feel as if they have an obligation to be lenient with me . My work can be described as grotesque because I love to use descriptive words to put the reader in the story and for them to watch it all unfold clearly . I want to inspire people with my work and I hope to change the world with it as well. I want to be good enough to profit from it for I have a nephew and myself to put through school and I want him to have as many opportunities as possible .Thank you for your time.
A monster has come to finish its hunt , it makes quite an entrance .
Rated: 13+
~364 Words
Dark, Death, Horror/Scary
Type: Poetry
Updated 6 years ago
    Rated: ASR · Dark · #2046918
    No matter how much time passes you will always chase the sunlight even if it is faint .
    Rated: ASR · Dark · #2031553
    In the few moments the dragon spends awake what thoughts run through its mind ?
    Rated: 13+ · Dark · #2031386
    These words encompass the life of a hunter .
    Rated: 13+ · Dark · #2031198
    One`s identity is precious yet it is so easily taken for granted and forgotten .
    Rated: 13+ · Dark · #2031124
    A monster has come to finish its hunt , it makes quite an entrance .
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