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Hi! I am Nivir, a sixteen year old from Hong Kong who wishes to one day be able to publish my already completed seven-book series that took me much too long to complete! This is an ambitious project, and I have spent eight years to finish the series. Finally, I come to this site to hopefully obtain reviews and to improve myself. I am not a good writer compared to many of my peers, and if you enjoy the short few chapters that I will put here day by day, please do leave a review and tell me how I could improve! Thank you very much!
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    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2216358
    Read the introduction!
    Rated: 18+ · Sci-fi · #2217852
    As Losar deals with the insurgents, the second voice makes its appearance.
    Rated: 18+ · Sci-fi · #2217565
    Together with Losar, Samantha faces the insurgents in the final decisive battle.
    Rated: 18+ · Sci-fi · #2217424
    The Commanding Officer and the siblings finally meet, and the final confrontation begins.
    Rated: 18+ · Sci-fi · #2217197
    Losar decides it is time to act on his plan, and one becomes two.
    Rated: 18+ · Sci-fi · #2216909
    ... It was never supposed to be easy.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2216357
    Rivin and Roya finally talk, but answers only bring forth even more convoluted questions.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2215775
    A voice whispers to Rivin in his dreams, and he wakes up with the enemy on his trail.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2215512
    After receiving a call from Lyla, Losar leaves his office to join in the pursuit.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2215404
    Samantha meets a buoyant girl, but beneath an innocent face lies one of unrelenting force.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2215217
    Rivin meets an unusual stranger, and his dreams are beginning to rebel against him.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2215001
    Losar will do anything to find his phantom thief and retrieve his stolen tech.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2214838
    Samantha tries to calm her brother down, until a letter starts them on a trip for answers.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2216018
    Rivin finds a computer underneath his house, and mom disappears.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2214748
    In the middle of their familial training, Rivin discovers a secret room in the walls.
    Rated: 13+ · Sci-fi · #2214647
    The prologue to the seven book series. Please leave feedback!
    Rated: E · Contest Entry · #2216027
    Show, Don't Tell
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