Was this a contest? I ask because the instructions for the blank was a strong descriptive interesting word int the blank. I can think of a list of words that would be more so that few. Just saying. I love the poem.
I know I’ve read this before—perhaps even here—but I wanted to thank you for writing it. Reading it again reminded me of something I’ve been wanting to write for quite some time.
It fits beautifully with a blog I’m planning, and it truly complements the thoughts I’ve been gathering. Your words sparked that connection for me, and for that, I’m very grateful.
Mind twirls exploring themselves in restless anticipation of dressing themselves in something new and exciting to see. Fun stuff, playing with friendly imagination as one's best friend.
So far my favourite place to write is outside at our home. We back onto bushland and a reserve known for the many different species of birds that live there. It is a hotspot for bird watchers. As we back onto it we have all those birds coming around every year at different times. The birdsong is amazing especially first thing in the mornings, you wake to it.
So so far, outside, with the view of the trees, the sounds of the birds, plus them visiting our birdbaths etc.
Granite breath, thin air bites.
My hands tried to grab the ropes for my lifeline!
The skies began to oscillate.
This is the end of my life!
I started to convey my regards to God.
Suddenly I felt I could reach the top.
Took a fresh breath.
A successful journey began at that time.
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