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 Barbados Weather Change  Open in new Window. (E)
Winter Beach in Barbados
I've added a new entry to my book, "Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six" Open in new Window.:
         "week two Sam's first Kiss " Open in new Window.
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         "week one I remember" Open in new Window.
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  Decision Day  Open in new Window. (E)
based on our true love story
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 Tell Me, the Elephant Said Open in new Window. (E)
Humanity on trial
I've added a new entry to my book, "Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six" Open in new Window.:
         "final poem Life In Between" Open in new Window.
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         "sci-Fi Haiku five poems" Open in new Window.
I've added a new entry to my book, "Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six" Open in new Window.:
         "prompt 51 alligator alcatraz prison " Open in new Window.
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My only suggestion would be to transpose the last two lines for clarity. The *Heart* of the poem is spot on.
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six Open in new Window. (13+)
where I will store my weekly poetry challenge poems plus a few other related poems
I've added a new entry to my book, "Blog Entries reposted from the my blog" Open in new Window.:
         "latest blog postings " Open in new Window.
I've added a new entry to my book, "More Poet's Place Poems" Open in new Window.:
         "alligator ALcatraz Sparrowlet" Open in new Window.
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You've got the Sparrow but not the let... You're missing line 6. *Laugh*
I've added a new entry to my book, "More Poet's Place Poems" Open in new Window.:
         " Alligator Alcatraz Prison Trimericc " Open in new Window.
I've added a new entry to my book, "Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six" Open in new Window.:
         "Opening A locked door " Open in new Window.
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You found the key... in your imagination. *Laugh*
I've added a new entry to my book, "Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six" Open in new Window.:
         "Greatest Love Song of All Time" Open in new Window.
I've added a new entry to my book, "Shadow and Light Poetry" Open in new Window.:
         "July 2025 Prompt Three Why Doves Cry?" Open in new Window.
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