Hey ya'll! I went through all the reviews for this piece, and I've made some revisions. Originally, it was copy+pasted from my friend's google doc she had for this story. Now, it should be easier to read and should flow better. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated! Thanks! ~Amelia
Hey Ya'll! You may of seen this on The Shameless Plug page, and I'm needing feedback. seeing as this is for a school assignment, I need to know which version of the poem. Version 1 is the original, version 2 is the revised edition. This poem is due Friday, Feb 12. Please review the piece saying which one is better. Thanks in advance! ~Amelia
hey! i was on RAOK, looking for an upgrade, but i noticed something. what does it mean "8 visible items in their ports" ? i want an upgrade, but i dont have a card to use to pay, i only have cash, and not much of it at that. could someone explain it to me? thx in advance!
hey guys! im wondering how to edit the little thing beside your name? the thing with the picture? Mine is a bunch of question marks. I've gotten to the place once and now I can't find it. if anyone could help, that would be great!