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|HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! WOOHOO!!! |
|just a friendly reminder that you are a ray of sunshine, hope you have a lovely day💞|
|HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!!!!!! Enjoy your day by reviewing all the wonderful ratings you've received during your last 4 years here! |
|I SHOT AN ELEPHANT IN MY PAJAMAS LAST NIGHT. HOW HE GOT IN MY PAJAMAS I'LL NEVER KNOW. Mind your sentences!|
|A tip I learned the other day... go to your book and find "ly" and take out as many as you can (words like quickly, slowly, etc.) Either consider removing the word or rework the sentence. In doing so, I found my sentences became more original and tailored to my writing style. Try it out! I'm happier with my writing now. |
I say this because I read somewhere that a lady submitted her query letter, and the agent rejected it with this comment, "Nice story, but what's unique about your sentences?"
|I wrote the first thing that came to mind and this is what came out: |
| ||Sculphrus (E)|
I wrote the first things that came to my head. An exercise in letting the creative out.
|Hello fellow writers! |
I currently have 260 views for my novel, THE WAR QUEEN. This is a completed adult fantasy novel that I am working on getting published. It is free and downloadable on Smashwords.com. Here is the direct link:
I'm trying to gain exposures and reviews to catch the eye of literary agents! Will you help me?
You look good in Yellow!