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| How much repetition is normal in a novel? I'm asking because one of my favorite authors repeated at least 20x that the main character worked in daycare for a decade. It is some serious  for me. So that begs the question. How much is too much? |
Purple Eyez Aglow  - not everyone starts with book 1 therefore sometimes stuff is repeated? Maybe? |
Reply| It's the Great Pumakin! - Which I understand. When book focused on her relationship and the reminders of her started, I was there. But it continued to be mentioned so much that it dragged the story down. I write series romance mostly, so I know things need to put in. I'm guilty of not explaining who previous main characters are, job, life, etc. I just felt like it was mentioned every other chapter to point I actually turned the page to move on from it, and that was halfway through the book. Now I get to figure out how much is enough, and what is overkill. |
Reply| Purple Eyez Aglow - it probably was overkill. I've seen that too...it's like, "enough is enough, already!" |
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I've added a new entry to my book, "Poisoned Purple Pen"  : "From bad to Worse" I'm all up for advice at this point. |
I apologize for the delay. New prompt is waiting for you! "Tales of Seduction ~ Oct. Round OPEN" What's your Costume?  |
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"Earn the Badge - Closed " CLOSES Tomorrow Night! This is your last chance to earn some Rare Merit Badges! |
| Let me know if anyone can send merit badges to these people on my behalf. All GPs will be reimbursed! WakeUpAndLive️🦇Elf'sSpell Egaeus ~Brian K Compton~ ß00eyeʐ  Fearlycia Lee ☮ ScaryBee  Anarchist Angel 🏴  |
Hey The ScaryMaster  and The StoryWitchress  I am absolutely loving the fact that I can type in the badge I'm looking to send! The new layout is FANTASTIC!!  |
| If anyone can help send badges to participants at "Earn the Badge - Closed " for CR credit, please contact me. All GPs will be reimbursed! Thanks ~ T |
Happy Monday!
Classes Begin Today! Tomorrow, Registration will close. |
Where are all the Paranormal Romance Writers? It's the Great Pumakin!  has created something special to get your creative juices flowing. Join us this session for
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Classes start in one week! There are only a few spots left for the NEW novel/novella writing class, "HSP Romantica Class" You can register for HSP classes here: "HSP Class Registration" by Purple Eyez Aglow All class information can be found here: "House of Sensual Prose " |
Since I've returned regularly this year, I've been opening all my old groups/contests/activities. You know that means I'm here to plug something again, right?  Where are all the Romance - Erotica Writers? I've got a cozy little nook just for you!
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HSP's Fall Session kicks off! Class information can be found here: "House of Sensual Prose " HSP membership "HSP New Member Survey" Class Registration: "HSP Class Registration" Classes run for 6 weeks and begin September 2nd! |
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