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Hi, I'm new to the platform.
I've just written a story today called "Sweet Times", I'd really like some responses/feedback as I think it's the piece with most potential, if you can please leave a review.
I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Other World  (E)
Jackson sees his home world from a lonely perch

Short sci-fi piece on leaving and returning
I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Irreconcilable Differences  (E)
Short poem on a broken 'friendship'

Short poem I have vaguely being thinking of for sometime
I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Occasions  (E)
a short semi-autobiographical piece I wrote over five minutes on Medium

It's a very short bit on reflecting on childhood that I spontaneously wrote, hope you can like
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