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I just wrote a new story, check it out:
 Rise of the Lacertilians  (E)
Lizard creatures invade a small town and kidnap a man to teach them English

(It's got lizard monsters!)
Hey I just posted another story, read it if you want:

 
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The Light  (E)
A girl finally learns why her family lives in the woods
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Devil's Advocate  (E)
A forum where I ask questions to strengthen your story, fix plot holes, and much more!
Has anyone considered making a no adjectives/adverbs contest?
northernwrites All good points, I was just asking because I saw an instagram contest by a ghost writer(@robynleewrites) about this and I thought it looked interesting.
*Sigh* Okay guys so there's this story I've been working on and it's been growing a ton which I'm really happy about. But sadly it's to big for it's crib so now I'm making a part 4. I really appreciate all of the people who have helped me on this story, you have all given your honest opinions on it and I'm super grateful. So this is what I have finished:
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And if you have no idea what I'm talking about, start from the beginning:
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The End of Time  (13+)
A man, just after dying, wakes up where he slept last night, 100 years later.
Just here to publicly thank GabriellaR45 Author Icon for giving an awardicon for my forum *Bigsmile*
Devil's Advocate  (E)
A forum where I ask questions to strengthen your story, fix plot holes, and much more!
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Thoughts on writing a character that's unstable but also wise?
*crickets*
Recently, I've been trying to think more about theme when I'm writing and how it connects to the other parts of my stories. So how do you choose your themes when writing and how do you connect it with the story and characters? Any other thoughts?

Hey,Tinman. Just my own thoughts.
         I think of theme as meta-text, a concept which forms in the mind of the reader. The theme element of meta-text emerges from the interactions of characters within the framework of the plot. When I want to elicit consciousness of a distinct theme within the stream of my reader's thinking, I can adjust the composition of my characters or the situation which drives the plot, or the setting.
         I start with theme only when I want to write an essay.
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Today I saw my younger self  (E)
A poem about me seeing my younger self in someone else

This free verse poem is inspired by a boy who reminded me of my childhood.
I really want to thank whoever gave me this upgraded membership *Hug1**Smile**Hug2* you are a great person!
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The End of Time  (13+)
A man, just after dying, wakes up where he slept last night, 100 years later.
Hey! So Charlie ~ Author Icon made a writing.com discord so we can talk about writing and stuff online.

Here's the link: https://discord.gg/RunwgN
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Yep. Still working on it.
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