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I've added a new entry to my book, "the monsters under my bed:
         "Book 2 Chapter 6
Have you scared yourself yet?

I haven't truly read this yet, but briefly looking at it, it's hard to read.

There's no spacing between paragraphs. I suggest adding it because you wrote so much it's all clumping together and then starts blur into one long word. Or a blackhole, depending on how you look at it. *Wink*

I don't know what a "wyrms" is, but he sounds cute.

Snatching magpies out of the sky - now this is getting interesting.

Please fix the paragraph spacing so it'll be easier for me to read... pretty please.
Congrats on winning NaNo! *Thumbsup*
I've added a new entry to my book and updated the previous one, "the monsters under my bed:
         "Chapter 6
Just gave the monsters under my bed a description...and a new chapter!
 the monsters under my bed  (E)
A boy finds a tunnel under his bed filled with all sorts of strange creatures
Darling, we need to work out my access!
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