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Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (3.0)
some of it's nice in flow, but there are some very rough spots. i'd read it aloud and try smoothing it if you hear a forced spot in the poem.

the length is nice, not just some meaningless thing.

but i did notice there were some lines in there that felt a little immautre or just cheesy that i think lost some of the respect of the poem.

but nice job! keep writing, you have alot of potential.
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