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Review of my painting 2016  
Review by AGCondor
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it and you’ve got well the effect of melting away into the distance. Probably you’re not Hindu (as you live in Bangladesh), but the painting is not incompatible with the Hindu conception of Maya. Look forward for more.
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Review of I Dreamt of Fire  
Review by AGCondor
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A really fierce poetry. The heart is a mortar and a shell simultaneously. The former, I guess, is preferable. “The beautiful death” is of course beautiful from the mortar’s point of view. “Raining” is gorgeous, but needs clarification: do not mortar shells explode on impact?
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Review of Claws and Teeth  
Review by AGCondor
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good, if you do not know Russian. And have not read Maximillian Voloshin.
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Review of The Last Letter  
Review by AGCondor
Rated: E | (2.0)
The “hospital” simply would be much better than the “hospital ground”. Don’t let the rhyme trick you.
Also you should improve your military items. Bombs do not hide under the sand, it’s the prerogative of mines. And a helicopter pilot cannot know from above where mines are. So his refusal to land does not add to his credit.
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