I like it and you’ve got well the effect of melting away into the distance. Probably you’re not Hindu (as you live in Bangladesh), but the painting is not incompatible with the Hindu conception of Maya. Look forward for more.
A really fierce poetry. The heart is a mortar and a shell simultaneously. The former, I guess, is preferable. “The beautiful death” is of course beautiful from the mortar’s point of view. “Raining” is gorgeous, but needs clarification: do not mortar shells explode on impact?
The “hospital” simply would be much better than the “hospital ground”. Don’t let the rhyme trick you.
Also you should improve your military items. Bombs do not hide under the sand, it’s the prerogative of mines. And a helicopter pilot cannot know from above where mines are. So his refusal to land does not add to his credit.
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