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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Liam and Harry

Liam turns to the young man
He really wants to have some fun
'I'm bursting to pee', Liam says.
'Pee in here', young Harry suggests.

Harry squats and opens his mouth
golden waters about to spurt out
He closes his eyes. Liam explodes,
And gives him the blessing, the golden liqor

Lip-smacking, Harry stands up
Liam says nothing, he's just zipping up.
Up and down, they want to have fun.
Liam and Harry, father and son.
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Review of I am a Poem  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Impeccable. Well done!
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