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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think this is a great strory, but it needs a better ending. Yes, you're supposed to leave your reader wanting more, but this is too... I don't know how to describe it. Other than that, I think you should keep writing and just try to keep the same voice.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I think that is very inspirational... I'm sorry about your grandmother, and I think you should continue to write if it helps you feel better about your loss. I think the poem could have been a little better, but keep working on it!
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