The story seems to be about a child. When she escapes from her home to go there to see the pixie which she believes to be a squirrel. She has been caught by a human who is pursuing the wolf, the wolf is his friend.
The man returned the girl to her home. Her parents look at her and try to explain that they are in danger from other forces that preside there. She does not believe that there is no threat until she is caught by the enemy who attack her home. She has been practicing to fight with swords, but are using fake ones for the purpose of training.
Her house is over run by the enemy. She can not protect her home.The house is lost. Her fears are realized, she must do something, but what?
You have brought to us a character to care for. You have given us curiosity that is the child. She wants to destroy the enemy, but she hasn't the heart to do this. You have given us quite the tale to read. Thank you for writing this.
Your character is engaging, imaginative. Your description is very well designed, I could imagine what she is imagining with your choice of words well done. YOu have a distinct voice. YOur story carries us to your realm. Good work, there.
Never give up on yourself.