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I am taken aback!!! I haven't seen a style like yours in years. I loved every moment of this read. Proof read over again , there are a couple of errors in spelling but all in all I am astonished by what you have offered.
Your characters are alive. I was drawn in by what I read and felt a part of all that was happening. I can't wait to see what awaits him on Amar. This is setting the stage for a story unlike anything else in print today. Thanks for putting yourself into this read. I can tell you are a part of the story or it wouldn't have the power that it does.
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