Very well written. The essence of your writing paints a beautifully dark picture for the reader. The story really captured my attention, and it left me wanting more of it. I believe you have a great future in writing if you haven't had any published work yet. The story was dark, ominous, gloomy, sad, and tragic. I loved every minute of it!
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