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Review of Love Unrequited  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very descriptive, I love your choice of words and symoblism, great job! :)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The descriptive words were excellent, and the emotional pull to keep reading was amazing as well.

I felt the last two paragraphs could have been worded better, maybe leaving more to imagination then to say "she was a vampire" for example. Great work though :)
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very emotionaly revealing, I loved your use of words. I did think however that you should have added a second verse or a different ending... it kind of seemed to abruptly end.
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