You vividly illustrated the fleeting aspect of life, that nothing is ever unchanging. I felt quite sad at the end, when you wrote that nature is the eraser that erased her. I enjoyed very much the description of the emotional state of mind, of wanting to belong to another and yet, change is constant. Awesome work!
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