Thank you. I really enjoyed reading your story. You had me fooled right up to the end. Then came the punchline. What a punchline! I laughed and then I read it to my husband. He was all defensive, convinced he wouldn't like it. After all we are both entered in the same competition and he feels he has to be loyal! And then he laughed. (We're both suckers for a bit of gore and ghast in our horror) Good luck in the competition. You deserve to win with such a succinct and meaty tail.
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