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Review by AngelWords
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You have a perfect foil in me. I am 75 years old and a poet...greeting card writer... This story is very raw and explicit to me. NOW, I enjoyed it immensely. Some of the jargon had to percolate in my brain for a while - as these were things I am unfamiliar with. However, I am a freelance editor so gave it my best shot. Usually, I work with a manuscript on which I can make notes and scribble, marking suggestions. You really have this stuff down pat and present it well. I was amused by the relationships...the poly groping and grouping needs some careful reading. This little missive leaves much to be desired and if ever you want to give me a broader chance...I am here with my rescue cats, LOL

I am just starting out here so have not many points to share.
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Review by AngelWords
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this... I am a faith-centered person and wondered if anyone posted this kind of poetry. Now I know. Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
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