|I saw your request for reviews and noticed that you've got quite a few collected here, so I jumped down to the bottom, figuring it was the most recent. :)
Review of: Something is Wrong
The repetition of "Is it normal" gives the poem a cadence that makes it feel circular, as if the thoughts keep circling in the speaker's head.
The second and third lines is hard-hitting, drawing me in, making me want to understand more about what's going on.
Lines 5-6 seem contradictory to the 2-3, with the speaker standing up to their father despite the fact that he intimidates them.
Line 8-9 speak to the bitterness of their interactions.
After that, the floodgates open, and all is revealed.
I hope that the speaker is able to eventually find a better place in dealings with their father, or if not, then find solace in the company of someone else.
It's a powerful piece of work. It feels raw, full of pain, and brutally honest. Wonderful job... but so sad. :(