Wow! I love the idea. I love the metaphor especially. The consistent image of drifting is absolutely beautiful. My one and only complaint is that it seems a bit rushed and itemized. Sort of a "This happened, and then this, and this" concept. Which can definitely work for stories, but because this one is such a deep, astute storyline, I feel like I'm still grasping for more detail, more description. How did the breeze feel? Did it change when the boats parted ways? Who were the other characters? Why is Samantha so important? Who were the other three? How did their personalities or who they were impact the path their boat took at the end? What impacted what to lead to the end of this story? I suppose what I'm getting at is, I want *more*. I really really love the metaphor and the imagery used, I just would like to see more of it. Fantastic job!
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