Very haunting imagery. The sea seems to be a universal theme at some point for all of us poets, with such a wealth of possibilities.
Again, I truly love the imagery of this piece. The use of rhyme and then not rhyming is a bit confusing and makes for a difficult read.
Have you read this piece out loud? Excellent habit to get into.
I really like this poem...a favored subject of mine.
Keep writing~!
Jill
The imagery of this piece is beautifully done. Grammatically, it is sound, but the words do not flow as easily for me as they could. THe ending line is extremely powerful in it's starkness.
Overall, a very well written piece.
Write On~!
Jill
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