I generally do not like poetry. And it seems that is about a personal relationship that causes pain for you. I laughed. This was great. The correllation drawn between balloons and a busybody bag of air is exquisite. The switch between happy balloon talk and then what this poem is really about was enjoyable. I have no complaints. Your POV on life would be an entertaining reality TV show I suspect.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/apollyon7
Generated in 0.09 seconds at 6:35am on Mar 10, 2026 via server WEBX2.