I really love the storyline. I would love it if you were published. That would be great, wouldn't it? I love Paul. great character. and so is Beetle and Giggled. haha, how did you ever come up with this? really great work, I'd definitely read more. Good luck!
I really love the storyline. I also love Julius, I and I think Reece is also a great character. Definitely keep up the writing. I am hooked, and have read so many of your chapters already! I would love it if you were published. That would be great, wouldn't it?
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