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Review of The Moon  
Review by Sherry Asbury
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is unique poetry and congratulations on your win!
I love the moon and havicturese many Pinterest pictures in fantasy and reality.
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Review by Sherry Asbury
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Charming story - well-written and captivating. I lived 7 years in Montana and have an absolute love for the memories. You write very well and Cody will cherish this forever.


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Review by Sherry Asbury
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem about one of my favorite movies. You sound like a fascinating person and I look forward to keeping track of you and reading your fine work.


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Review by Sherry Asbury
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Darn scientists - how they play god. Your poem inspires one to keep an anger for such outrages. Poem is constructed well and keeps its rhythm and pace throughout.Touched a nerve.


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Review by Sherry Asbury
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have a unique voice and your words seem to shout in joy. There is a reverence to the tone of your poem...with sprinkle of humor, The imagery of the sun rising and the earth beginning to glow was powerful. Your line spacing work especially well - making each line shout and rejoice. I very much enjoyed this lovely work


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Review of My Inner Despair  
Review by Sherry Asbury
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your rhyme is wonderful - no using words just for rhythm, which makes a poem jerky and not a joy to read. Great use of the word list. You did not use them in ways just to have a word set. You actually told a very sad story that draws sympathy from the reader. Superb ending!


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