You have a unique voice and your words seem to shout in joy. There is a reverence to the tone of your poem...with sprinkle of humor, The imagery of the sun rising and the earth beginning to glow was powerful. Your line spacing work especially well - making each line shout and rejoice. I very much enjoyed this lovely work
Your rhyme is wonderful - no using words just for rhythm, which makes a poem jerky and not a joy to read. Great use of the word list. You did not use them in ways just to have a word set. You actually told a very sad story that draws sympathy from the reader. Superb ending!