This was DEFINITELY an awesome poem. This poem speak so much to me and how I feel. This is a poem that I can seriously relate to. This is beyond a poem that I needed to read. This poem shows me that I am not alone and I am not the only one out there feeling this way. Thank you for writing this poem.
Sounds like a very deep thoughtful definition on what love is and what love is supposed to be like. This is a warming poem. I like it. Keep up the good work. Don't stop writing. It is not easy pouring your heart out to the public, and it is not easy opening up your world for everyone to see.
I loved this poem and is actually going to be marked as a favorite. Keep doing what you're doing. I loved the fact that this is a great way to view Gods love....having a relationship with God we are able to enter into His desired rest for us....and it definitely feels awesome to know that we can rest in the hand of God.
This is an awesome poem. I love it and I am definitely going to rate it 5 stars. Believers know what comes with the territory as to the reason why we have to prepare ourselves and remained prepared because its coming. Everybody may not be ready for it. He protects us through our relationship with Him, which is an awesome thing.
THIS POEM WAS VERY DEEP! IT TELLS OF A WOMAN WHO FELT LIKE A FOOL LOVING SOMEONE WHO DID NOT LOVE HER BACK. IT ALMOST MAKES YOU MAD THAT SHE HAD TO DEAL WITH IT. IT MAKES ME WONDER HOW HIS OTHER WIVES FELT AS WELL. THE "WHAT IF" THOUGHTS COME TO MIND. KEEP WRITING I ENJOYED THIS POEM AND HAVE MARKED IT AS A FAVORITE.
My first thought: I LOVE THIS
Secondly, This poem speaks to the desires of your heart. I enjoyed this poem and hope to see more of your work. This is an inspirational poem that I am going to add to my favorites.
I enjoyed reading this poem. It is good to know that we have angels that encamp around us and keep us safe from all hurt, harm, or danger whether it is emotionally, physically, or spiritually. Keep writing as this poem has blessed me.
I love this poem! It is awesome. We know that the Lord is ALWAYS the solution. I have come to learn that there are no other answers outside of God. When we try to do it on our own it doesn't go right. Thats why i constantly have to depend on God.
This poem is deep. I love it. The "what if" thoughts can be plaguing. I always ask God to give me a glimpse of what it was like to walk with Him in that time. I always try to imagine the thoughts that was going through Peter's head when he was on that boat. There were times when I thought "what if it was me on that boat?" This poem expresses the very thoughts that we are daily plagued with.
This poem speaks volumes about God. This poem shows how the perfect one can still love and use those of us who are imperfect! Thank you for this poem and I really loved the style of it. The tone it sets is amazing and it is definitely an inspiration.
I LOVE THIS POEM! THIS POEM IS AWESOME! It also makes me think about all of the times that I messed up. There are so many thoughts that I have about my own mistakes and the mistakes of others. I then think about the Lord and how he paid the ultimate sacrifice for us. It brings tears to my eyes and I am filled with thankfulness and gratitude.
This is definitely a poem that I can relate to. I know the feeling and the thoughts that come with it. Really great poem and I really loved it. Thank you for submitting this and I believe you have a natural voice for poetry.
This is deep to me and speaks volumes. In reading this you can clearly feel and imagine it in your mind and make it a reality. This piece also will make you think even as I am writing this review I am thinking now. This is real to you and a reality for you as well and do not let anyone say anything different, if they do then they don't understand it.
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