I really like this story alot. Your vivid descriptions really brought Sam to life. While I was reading the story because of the great way you described Sam's feelings I really wanted him maybe actually to get back with Flavia. The scene where they are at the train station and Flavia kisses her yellow flower is awesome and meaningful. The ending makes sense and it totally goes with the story
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