|What a strange tale! It was interesting by far, and I chuckled severely in the beginning. Ms. Finch telling off Danny's mother like that? Priceless, truly. As for the story of the heart in the jar, it felt both good and far too short. If you ever lengthen it, I would die to know, because I think this has a lot of potential. Alice's Curiosity Shoppe seemed too short, too rushed, as did the end. But the grammar and punctuation was phenomenel, moreso than just about anything else I've read upon this site. Thank you, and please keep writing! I am a huge fan!