*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/batmanwriter
Review Requests: OFF
17 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of The Shed  
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That was both creepy and scary. If that was your intention, bravo.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
2
2
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very cute. :D
3
3
Review of The Notice  
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: E | (4.0)
Major feels, Susie. Major feels. That is a story of both pressurizing sadness and freeing joy, and I felt all of the emotions going on so naturally. You are amazingly talented, and I pray you keep writing.
4
4
Review of TheUnsurprised  
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
What on Earth was that? That was incredibly fascinating up until the end! What was that?!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
5
5
Review of That's you  
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: E | (5.0)
This made my soul cry, you beautiful writer you.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
6
6
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a strange tale! It was interesting by far, and I chuckled severely in the beginning. Ms. Finch telling off Danny's mother like that? Priceless, truly. As for the story of the heart in the jar, it felt both good and far too short. If you ever lengthen it, I would die to know, because I think this has a lot of potential. Alice's Curiosity Shoppe seemed too short, too rushed, as did the end. But the grammar and punctuation was phenomenel, moreso than just about anything else I've read upon this site. Thank you, and please keep writing! I am a huge fan!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
7
7
Review of Orion's Belt  
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: E | (3.0)
Well written. Excellent job.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
8
8
Review by Conner M. Leach
Rated: E | (3.0)
I feel as though you didn't actually incorporate the personality of Batman into the story. Batman's not a talker. He talks only as much as he needs to. That being said, the way he won seems extremely sketchy. Superman is a powerhouse, there's no way he'd let Batman catch the package--his x-ray vision would let him know it was Kryptonite. Superman is faster and stronger than Bruce Wayne, so, really, if you're story were canon, the argument must be made that Supes let the Dark Knight win. I totally agree that Batman is perfectly capable of victory in this fight, but not the way you wrote it. I hope no offense is taken.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
8 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/batmanwriter