Oh i loved reading this. I could see the chase so clearly in my mind as I read it. I also enjoyed the ending, I wasn't sure which way you would go with it, but liked the way the Pool was enough to defeat her, (and Charlie thinking he had victory, but i can see belle being embarrassed by her mistake and hiding up the tree, as cats do when they make a mistake!) perfectly summing up the battle between cats and dogs! It flowed really well and has stayed in my mind post reading, which I like, Thanks
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