I really enjoyed this piece. It is a very fun read, and its somthing almost any readers would relate to. The only reason I gave this poem a 4.5 instead of a 5 is the endind seemed to have sort of a diffrent flow from the rest of the poem. Not that it was badly written, just out of sorts.
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