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Review by Requiem
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow - this is fabulous! I love how you told me about Jeff before telling me his name. I think the second paragraph is my favorite. I love you described your experience with Jeff. I also love how you used the ocean to tie everything together in the last part of the piece. Great job!
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