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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This poem was very eerie. If that was the intention, it worked! The line breaks look great, and g o n e looks really cool. Haha, I guess I am a wicked person or something, but I really liked the mood and tone of this poem. Or maybe that just means that the intentions of the poem were effective? The title sort of decreases the effectiveness, but only because "shadows" is such a common word. I am not trying to rewrite your poem, but I would recommend using a word with a stronger connotation if you want to give readers more of a spooky feeling.
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