This a very thoughtful piece and touches on a very difficult subject. I think it is well written and the author is comfortable with use of vocabulary. I found a couple of words maybe misplaced but the story flowed well. The description made me feel as if I was there and I particularly liked the mention of rosacea. In my view it would be hard to improve on this and the author has a crisp and refreshing writing style.
A nice easy read. it does not tax the readers thinking and is pure escapism. It could also be a parable identifying the issues of addiction. i quite enjoyed it but everything was "too pat". the grammar is good and i appreciated the use of colloquialisms.
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