|Love, love, love this. I love how you are able to give us the information we need about each of the races... but it doesn't feel like an info dumb. Your writing is simply fantastic.
"The Hunters called themselves Protectors of the Secret and believed they were given a divine assignment to rid the world of the supernatural; basically anything that proved more powerful or knowledgeable than themselves. "
The Hunters called themselves Protectors of the Secret. They believed themselves to be divine eradicators of anything that proved more powerful or knowledgeable than themselves; namely the supernatural like myself.
Also, he does a bit of smirking in the first part... I'd change at least one of those.
Very good. Is this part of something larger, or is it a self-contained short story?