love the concept here! Maren's frustration's feels real and the mirror tree is a great metaphor for self reflection. It was a strong, thoughtful piece, with a clear emotion arc.
Intense and haunting! The story does an excellent job of immersing the reader in Madeline's fear and disorientation. While reading this short story an idea popped up in my mind which i would love to share with you on any social platform you prefer.
Beautifully written! The story captures longing and heartbreak so vividly and Jack and Christina's reunion feels tender and emotional. I have a visual idea for this short story which i would love to share with you on any other platform you prefer.
Great story! Sam is a sharp intense lead and the mix of personal history, danger and moral grit works really well. The pacing is tight, the twist land, and her relationship dynamics add depth. also i got an idea for the story if you don't mind should i share it with you?
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