|I enjoyed reading your story. It was written very clearly was easy to read. Not overly descriptive and a very nice moral at the end of the story. The only line I thought a bit awkward was: A cloud moved over the sun, and it became very dark in the little green plant. I would suggest this: A cloud blocked the sun, and the day became very dark.
I liked the pictures and this is a very nice story for young children to read.
I have just added a new story, Carolyn's Pond #2079310. It has a frog in the story as well. Maybe you could take a look and tell me what you think.