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Review of October Omen  
Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great horror paranormal. Good luck in the contest in every word was great writing phrases. I enjoyed it. Great job! Keep writing on!
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Review of Dancing Dresses  
Review by Jen
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this short poetry. It was unique and dark flowed smoothly. Great job, Sherry. Keep writing on!
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Review of Revenge  
Review by Jen
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great story on revenge for her friend but sad she had to sacrifice herself for her friend to live. But that makes a good story you sacrifice your soul to save your friend from being tortured from others. Great job!
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Review of Screams  
Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
#2172726 Haunted Castle in Canterbury hills word count 1389 Like to enter the contest entry and tell me what you think? Jen


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Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
#2172626 The Haunted Grave
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Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My sister is named Jeanette Great fairytale. I truly liked it and would make a cute children's book because I wrote an ebook about Lucinda the Gifted fairy on Amazon.com/Jennifer Croy's books and Lulu.com/spotlight/Jennybooboo Keep writing on! Great job well done! :)
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Review of The Lost Ones  
Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You only had a few errors like this instead of his time but it was a great start of a mystery story, and I liked it. It left me curious what was going on with the teddy bear and the girl with black hair. Your a great story teller. Good Job!
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Review of Haunted Hotel  
Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very good beginning of your story. It gave me goosebumps reading each line. You have 1 misspelled word hair where it says air stood on the back of my neck. Other than that it left me wondering what was going to happen next with Allie going into the hotel. Well done! Good job!
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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Jen
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great story gave me goosebumps! Sad about Johnny & Becky though. You give a great tale of scary imagination and characters in your story. Bravo!
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Review of The Boogeyman  
Review by Jen
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Loved it! I remember seeing the Boogeyman movie when they found them in their closets That had me on the edge of my seat goosebumps running up and down my arms.
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Review of Time for School  
Review by Jen
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I think this was a great start. You had rhymes in each line, and I found a great poem start off. Well done!


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Review by Jen
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very good, keep up the good work! :) Jen
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Review by Jen
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love this spiritual poem you jotted down with words of the Lord keep up the good work! And Good luck in the contest :) Jen
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Review of My Dreams  
Review by Jen
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great! I loved how you rhymed each word of my dreams keep posting!
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Review by Jen
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well written as they always say Dog is man's best friend. I suffer from my bipolar disorder and I know how you feel I have 2 dogs and one cat but the cat is my son's and The two dogs are Chiuachua very loving but my male can be very hyper and sometimes drives me crazy.
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Review by Jen
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was very good so keep posting! I like this poem I never thought I would like cauliflower but its specially good with cheese sauce.
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Review by Jen
Rated: E | (5.0)
very well written and rhymed words Keep posting! I loved it!
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