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Review of She Smiles at Me  
Review by BMF
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very good work. You should continue your pursuits with writing. Contests are offered of this site to help you stay active.
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#333655 by Sophy v.2021

"Poetic Traditions Poetry Contest
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Review of My 1st Poetry  
Review by BMF
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice start. Congratulations on beginning this journey, keep up the good work.
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Review of Aloneness  
Review by BMF
Rated: E | (4.5)
I’m not a very good reader or at comprehending that of what I’ve read. But, many lines of this poem caused goosebumps. As if I was looking in a mirror at my own reflection. Good work.
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Review of All the Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Indeed. God is all and God is love.
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Review of Lost Pirate  
Review by BMF
Rated: E | (4.5)
I always wondered about that, and now i know
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Review by BMF
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Our life's consist of test that seperate one individual from the rest. The girl in this story is prime example of what normal is. Jack is part of her and pushing him away would be giving up on herself. It is nice to find another person or in this case character that understands the importance of life. It isn't what others might think of us for they are only our life's background. I am very happy with the way she was presented. As far as "tips for improvement", writing is art. Their should be no standard for improment, because with someone's hep it is no longer yours. I am a decent "story teller", but awful with spelling, grammer, sentence structure, ect. To many lose the art by searching for mistakes. Saddly their search is a waste of time for there are no mistakes in art, just different aspecs. Good Job BMF
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