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Review of The Shepherd  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great story. Reminiscent of "The Stand" with a twist.
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Review of With My Mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
i really liked it. And understood it. You might want to work on the switches between first and third person, which tend to be a little confusing.
Great work fir the first time.
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