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Review by Redser
Rated: E | (4.0)
An unusual way of writing but nicely balanced sentences make this work for me. Leaves me wanting to add a verse or two and see how it goes. Well done.
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Review of Spy in the Sky  
Review by Redser
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely story of a way most of us will end our days. Yet I don't find this a sad tale, seems she was well looked after by her daughter and that is a rare thing these days. Makes me wonder will mine look after me, somehow I would rather not.
Thanks for sharing, Redser.

Could you improve on this ? not that I can see.
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Review of Tommy Lightfoot  
Review by Redser
Rated: E | (5.0)
Told with real compassion made me feel as if i was actually there. Well done, will be watching out for more from you.
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Review by Redser
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A beautiful , beautiful story told from the heart. You obviosly love your mum very much and we all live in hope for an easy passage through our old age. Your mum is so lucky to have children who love her and remember the great mum and person she was. You are doing everything that is best for her now as she once did for all of you. God bless you in these sad sad times and try to hold on to the image of the mother you loved the best.
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